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Letters - Epilogue  (topic)
When I finished the last chapter of Letters I knew this part of Heath's story was complete. However, I wanted to see that infamous letter, the one that Leah sent in lieu of the discarded letter Heath had found. We saw Tom's reaction upon...
The Attic / Stories beginning with "J-K-L" from Victoria's Parlour

LkeVelvet

04/04/11 7:49 PM
Re: Monarch Oaks Chpt 9  (reply)
Hot dang girl!! What you've done with this chapter is just...just...oh heck, you've made me speechless! If I start quoting I'll never stop but there are just a few (lol) that I have to put down: "Nick closed his eyes and nodded,...
Victoria's Parlour

LkeVelvet

04/03/11 11:10 PM
Re: Frogs’ Eggs 7  (reply)
Ah, the patience children do have with their ignorant parents! This is an adorable scene and I couldn't help but smile all the way through "piggy back" indeed. I'm just glad that both the boys are alright and Victoria has a better...
The Attic / Stories beginning with "F" from Victoria's Parlour

LkeVelvet

04/03/11 10:36 PM
Re: The Misadventures of Nick and Heath - Entry 36 (Heath)  (reply)
ROFL - I love it I love it I love it! Keep 'em coming please and thank you! Hehe, that picture is too funny!
The Attic / Stories beginning with "M-N" from Victoria's Parlour

LkeVelvet

04/02/11 2:06 AM
Re: A Rose by Any Other Name - Chapter 1  (reply)
Nice beginning! Congrats on posting and for drawing me in right away! So I'm wondering what started, who started it and why oh why is Jarrod heading to Boston? btw - I'm glad that baby stopped crying too (you're description was far...
Victoria's Parlour

LkeVelvet

04/02/11 2:03 AM
Re: The Great Barkley Home Plot - Chapter 3  (reply)
Dixie if finally getting a chance to relax and just enjoy her family - wonderful! And best of all she's getting one heck of a surprise to return home to. Now I'm just as excited as Nick ( which means I'm really excited!). Your...
The Attic / Stories beginning with "G-H-I" from Victoria's Parlour

LkeVelvet

04/02/11 1:59 AM
Re: The Great Barkley Home Plot - Chapter 2  (reply)
I love this line and I think it sums it up nicely, “To Nick Barkley, who thinks he can really fool his wife." I'm looking forward to seeing this plan unfold and how the dynamic duo will put it into play!
The Attic / Stories beginning with "G-H-I" from Victoria's Parlour

LkeVelvet

04/02/11 1:50 AM
Re: Monarch Oaks Chpt 8  (reply)
Aww Redwood, you done it again! This is like an exceptionally fine play being acted out upon a stage. The sight of a drunken Heath, the smell of the run down saloon, the feel of Nicks grasp on Heath's hand...it leaves me in awe! I love...
Victoria's Parlour

LkeVelvet

04/02/11 1:43 AM
Letters Chapter 10 [Last Chapter]  (topic)
Heath felt a stirring in his heart the last few days, the old feeling of itchiness that had, in times past, meant he'd be moving on soon. It had been a little over a month since he had left Strawberry; a month and a week since he'd...
The Attic / Stories beginning with "J-K-L" from Victoria's Parlour

LkeVelvet

04/02/11 1:31 AM
Letters Chapter 9  (topic)
I have to make a brief correction. In my last post I said there would be two chapters and an epilogue before this story ends. I was wrong, it's three chapters and an epilogue ;-). Sorry about...
The Attic / Stories beginning with "J-K-L" from Victoria's Parlour

LkeVelvet

03/29/11 1:01 AM
Re: Monarch Oaks Chpt. 6  (reply)
Oh *claps in awe*, so much information here and seeing Nick puzzle things out from his memories of Heath over the past months was a real treat. I like the fact that your Nick is thoughtful and contemplative and is aware of his own...
Victoria's Parlour

LkeVelvet

03/29/11 12:43 AM
Re: The Great Barkley Home Plot - Chapter 1  (reply)
I'm glad Nick has hit on the solution to Dixie's problems (with the help of his little brother) but how is he going to get Dixie to agree? Now this does make for some finagling. BUT, Nick is up to the task. Dixie is going to fall to...
The Attic / Stories beginning with "G-H-I" from Victoria's Parlour

LkeVelvet

03/28/11 11:36 AM
Re: Once in a Lifetime Chapter Nine, Ten and Eleven  (reply)
Thank goodness Nick and the men made it out but what has Cynthia finally remembered? And what is Grant planning?!
The Attic / Stories beginning with "O-P-Q-R" from Victoria's Parlour

LkeVelvet

03/28/11 11:27 AM
Re: An Unexpected Visitor - Chapter 11  (reply)
Goodness...goodness! What a tangled web of emotions and all swirling around the younger boys in the family. This is not a good situation at all! I hope Leah shows more restraint than she has; someone should be the adult in this new and...
The Attic / Stories beginning with "U-V-W-X-Y-Z" from Victoria's Parlour

LkeVelvet

03/28/11 11:21 AM
Re: The Misadventures of Nick and Heath - Entry 35 (Nick)  (reply)
You had me rolling!! So much fun and so needed. Thank you thank you for this light-hearted story. I like the detailed intro and then Nick's short question and Heath's shorter answer. Priceless!
The Attic / Stories beginning with "M-N" from Victoria's Parlour

LkeVelvet

03/28/11 11:15 AM
Re: Return to the Heart - Chapter 66  (reply)
Wonderful imagery Patti - just wonderful! I loved the way you visited all the residents of the house, their meditation on the moon connects them and yet they're separate in their thoughts. The scene with Jake was especially powerful....
The Attic / Stories beginning with "O-P-Q-R" from Victoria's Parlour

LkeVelvet

03/28/11 11:12 AM
Re: Frogs’ Eggs 6  (reply)
Ah, I feel much better now about Heath, and his confusion over meeting his momma via drowning. Victoria handled that very well; I'm glad she recognized the dangers of the little fella's thinking - but she's a mother and so she would. Now...
The Attic / Stories beginning with "F" from Victoria's Parlour

LkeVelvet

03/28/11 10:58 AM
Re: Monarch Oaks Chpt 5  (reply)
Oh this is compelling Redwood. At first I thought Audra was the only one but now I know that something has been stirring all the Barkley children (except Eugene) to think more of Heath than they should. The description of Nick visiting...
Victoria's Parlour

LkeVelvet

03/28/11 10:54 AM
Letters Chpt.8  (topic)
I'm posting quickly; I have to go in just a bit. I hope to read and comment on the other amazing stories here over the weekend. I hope you enjoy this chapter. Here we get to the crux of Heath's internal struggle. Sometimes life hands us...
The Attic / Stories beginning with "J-K-L" from Victoria's Parlour

LkeVelvet

03/25/11 10:26 AM
Letters Chpt 7  (topic)
Heath didn’t know how to begin; he only knew that it would be better not to wait. Upon his rising, Heath chose to skip breakfast; instead he went in search of Jess ; he didn’t have to search hard, Jess was out back, gazing at...
The Attic / Stories beginning with "J-K-L" from Victoria's Parlour

LkeVelvet

03/21/11 4:55 PM

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